Spectator Sport

Spectator Sport

            The place I like the most is a place where I can feel relax, safe, and comfortable. And there's only one place in this world where it holds all these attributes altogether, and that's my room

I found it here
            No matter how many time I had come to my own room, I will not get bored, I felt familiar to this place even much more than my home itself. It gave me a classic look, even though the walls are all white and the floor is plain wooden, still it game me an adorable sense every time I walk into it. The texture gibes me the sense of how people's life is, for example, I went into my friend's room and there's some sort of droll black and white poster, it gives me chill through my spine, and later on I learn that he's a death metal fans.

            As long as I'm in my own room, it gives me a sense of safety, which never disappoint me. I believe that everybody's the same, they also feel safe when they're in their own room. The reasons are simple, like me when I'm in my own room, I know every corners of my room. There won't be any suspicious creatures coming or anything because I know my place.

           And the unwhimsical reasons why I like my room as the best place I'm ever been because it's comfortable and relaxing. As I walked into my room I opened a song, untied my shoelaces, take off my school homogeneous and laid down on my bed, it extricates from chain of this world's chastisement, to take off your burden and lay down comfortably. The silence make my heart calm down, my thought vanish, and the music gives me a smile on my cheek, which unfortunately only happens only on weekends because there're too much homework on normal schooldays.

I found it here
          I'm in grade 10, and there're still 2-3 years left before I graduate from EIS. And the only place where I can be myself and lift this heaviness of study off my shoulder for a while is my room.

2 comments:

  • Unknown | September 3, 2012 at 6:00 AM

    I really think this post is the most awesome post in the universe. Jimmy did not make me write this, I swear. This is clearly the greatest blogger post in the history of humankind. It has no flaws whatsoever. Steven Hawking should bow down to the great Jimmy. The only thing bad about this post is that there is nothing bad about it. I swear Jimmy did not make me write this. In fact, Jimmy did NOT go on my computer and he DID NOT type this comment.

  • Raveeroj Bawornkitchaikul | September 3, 2012 at 8:55 AM

    Great writing, Pakin. Your writing is very descriptive and unbiased. You could smoothly describe from one event to another with smooth transitions. You could smoothly describe your room with good vocabulary and non repeating. However, there are still some grammatical errors that are in the essay.From what you have wrote, you seem to like your room alot. From all of this I would give an A for this essay.
    Raveeroj Bawornkitchaikul

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